CHARACTER RECLAIMS

[powersthatbe]

From now until endgame, Synodiporia is closed to new applications. However, players who dropped or idled characters but who do not have a behavioral strike against them may reclaim characters at any time. Dungeons and app windows are no longer necessary. Simply comment below with "I'd like to bring [character (username)] back!" And we'll take it from there. Players already at 3 characters who wish to bring back a 4th or 5th may do so so long as they're current on AC. Players wishing to bring in characters above 5 may request special mod permission. If you are uncertain if you qualify to reclaim, please email us at synodiporians@gmail.com and ask!

Comments

Piña Colada - FFXIV

[levelthreehooligan]

*Overlapping voices squabble loudly in the common area.*
"That's sounded like a challenge to me!"
"Piña that was most definitely not a-"
"FIGHT ME YOU SON OF A BI-"
"PiñA NO! "


This is going to be one hell of a ride.

REVISIONS

[powersthatbe]

Thank you for your app! However, before we can grant a full acceptance, we'd like to see a couple of tweaks - specifically, we'd like a longer personality section, a better action-spam sample in which it is easier to tell who is speaking, and a general clean-up of capitalization and grammar. We'd also like to request some slight tweaks to her name, in order not to not break player immersion, as otherwise she's basically named after a cocktail. (A little alteration to either her first name or surname will probably suffice.)

Once we have this, you'll be good for processing once the app box closes! (We just figured we'd get these to you now, instead of when the box closes, to give you extra time to revise.)

Re: REVISIONS

[levelthreehooligan]

Hey yeah,
I can go through that I wrote most of the app at work in a google doc that didn't auto correct me :').
I can go for Pinara Conada, if that's acceptable?
The action spam was just Pinya talking, sorry if that wasn't clear. Did you want me to put in another character or just make it more clear that shes the only one talking there?
Did you want me to re-post or just tweak the original post?

Thanks!
Millie x

Re: REVISIONS

[powersthatbe]

That is an acceptable name tweak! Making the changes to the original post is fine; just let us know when they're posted.

As for the actionspam sample, what we generally look for is either a dialogue-heavy RP thread or something written in the style of a network post, where the character is doing all the talking but in a much more linear fashion than what you gave us. Disconnected snippets of dialogue don't tell us much about Pinya's speech, but a sample following one of those two approaches would.

Re: REVISIONS

[levelthreehooligan]

Heya,
Thanks for your patience, I've been in a Bad way for a couple of days! Revisions have been made, and I hope it's all okay.

Re: Piña Colada - FFXIV

[powersthatbe]

ACCEPTED!

Your character’s Arcana assignment is Chariot.

You can now introduce your character in the current mingle! The thread with your patron Arcanum will be set after the intro mingle but before the jaunt starts; feel free to get started on that whenever you like.

Powercap talk: Traditionally, we replace the 'look into people's memories' aspect of Echo abilities with Memory Sharing. How’s that work for you? Once your cap is finalised, please report it over here.