The Powers That Be ([personal profile] powersthatbe) wrote in [community profile] synodiporia_ooc 2014-06-02 09:22 pm (UTC)

Re: Heisuke Toudou | Hakuouki

Hello, thank you for applying! Before we process your application, we'd just like to ask for some revisions.

Your personality section, while overall fine needs a little bit more expansion/detail because of your proposed canon point. Since Chapter 6 involves a critical change in his outlook/views, even if he is from before this scene, he's at the cusp and potentially could run into a situation that prompts this change in Synodiporia very quickly. Therefore, we'd just like to make sure that you have enough of a grasp on his personality changes just in case!

Thank you so much, looking forward to hearing back!

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