HMD Meme (yes, we know it's a week late).

[powersthatbe]

HOW'S MY DRIVING CONCRIT MEME

This is Synodiporia's first HMD meme! (etc etc write intro if you like or it isn't necessary, your choice!!) MEME GUIDELINES ★ This meme is completely optional! If you're not into it, that's fine. ★ Comment here with the characters you play. ★ Post to other players that you have critique to offer. Other players will tell you how you're doing, too. ★ challenge While it is okay to simply praise others, this is not meant to be a lovememe and we ask you do not solely use it as one. For every good comment you post, post one thing that the player can improve on! If you choose not to do this, please remember this is meant to be a constructive cricitism meme. ★ There is a difference between giving concrit and just talking (without helpful advice), or saying a bunch of good things but not giving anything people can improve on. If you can't say why you like or why you want to praise someone's character or cannot offer suggestions for improvement, your commentary should be reconsidered before posting here. ★ Be polite on both sides. Present your criticism constructively rather than attacking or insulting (telling someone how they are doing things wrong but never explaining how they are doing it, giving examples, or how they could improve is not constructive criticism). If given criticism, please take it maturely and understand it is meant to see you improve with your character rather than try to be mean to you. We all want help here! Please feel free to use the code below to write your comment up! it's highly suggested you put your name in the subject line and then list your characters, but you may do it however you wish. <b>character:</b> CHARACTER NAME // SERIES <b>character journal:</b> <user name="journal"> <b>personal hmd:</b> if you have a personal hmd on your journal, feel free to link there as well to give people another option for communicating. <b>notes:</b> (here you can let people know if you are aware of things they may have concerns over such as being slow to tag back and if it may not be known, let people know you have been on vacation or busy etc. and have plans to improve on it. you can also ask for specific things you are worried on that you would like concrit, etc.)

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[wickedestwitch]

character: Elphaba Thropp | Wicked (musical)
character journal: wickedestwitch
personal hmd: feel free to PM her journal?
notes: I'm still feeling a bit shaky with her concerning driving factors/motivations for getting in to plot things. She is a veteran app of both Questing Country and Nova Venezia and I've handwaved some of the development she'd have needed to be more social. I'm also concerned that I'm currently playing her a little too social.

character: Malik Al-Sayf | Assassin's Creed
character journal: loyalrebel
personal hmd: Here! (screened comments)
notes: I'm fairly concrete in Malik's voice, and he's been here since the 4th wall event/Grid last year. With him I'd like some advice/feedback on whether or not I'm having him be approachable to outside characters while still balancing the fact that he's reluctant to be overtly sociable. I'm also playing a lot more heavily with infiltrations being a tool for development with him and wondering if people are enjoying joining in on that or want it to be pushed back more.

Overall Note: I know my tagging schedule is fairly out of synch with most of the game due to working overnights so it can be difficult to get rolling on threads outside of people who share that effective timezone. I've also been pulled in a few different directions IRL and scatterbrained more than usual, which is something I'm planning on trying to wrangle going forward.

[awitchdidit]

It's been a while since I've seen the musical, but Elphaba's demeanor as I've seen so far strikes me as something she could get to if removed from all the...well...Oz and put into a situation that isn't constant judgment and manipulation.

tl;dr voice seems good to me.