HMD Meme (yes, we know it's a week late).

[powersthatbe]

HOW'S MY DRIVING CONCRIT MEME

This is Synodiporia's first HMD meme! (etc etc write intro if you like or it isn't necessary, your choice!!) MEME GUIDELINES ★ This meme is completely optional! If you're not into it, that's fine. ★ Comment here with the characters you play. ★ Post to other players that you have critique to offer. Other players will tell you how you're doing, too. ★ challenge While it is okay to simply praise others, this is not meant to be a lovememe and we ask you do not solely use it as one. For every good comment you post, post one thing that the player can improve on! If you choose not to do this, please remember this is meant to be a constructive cricitism meme. ★ There is a difference between giving concrit and just talking (without helpful advice), or saying a bunch of good things but not giving anything people can improve on. If you can't say why you like or why you want to praise someone's character or cannot offer suggestions for improvement, your commentary should be reconsidered before posting here. ★ Be polite on both sides. Present your criticism constructively rather than attacking or insulting (telling someone how they are doing things wrong but never explaining how they are doing it, giving examples, or how they could improve is not constructive criticism). If given criticism, please take it maturely and understand it is meant to see you improve with your character rather than try to be mean to you. We all want help here! Please feel free to use the code below to write your comment up! it's highly suggested you put your name in the subject line and then list your characters, but you may do it however you wish. <b>character:</b> CHARACTER NAME // SERIES <b>character journal:</b> <user name="journal"> <b>personal hmd:</b> if you have a personal hmd on your journal, feel free to link there as well to give people another option for communicating. <b>notes:</b> (here you can let people know if you are aware of things they may have concerns over such as being slow to tag back and if it may not be known, let people know you have been on vacation or busy etc. and have plans to improve on it. you can also ask for specific things you are worried on that you would like concrit, etc.)

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Comments

Thomas

[neverfeltthatway]

character: Armin Arlert // Attack on Titan
character journal: neverfeltthatway
personal hmd: Personal, screened hmd here
notes: I realize I've been slow and flaky for the past half a year or longer. I was living in Turkey, then traveling abroad, then traveling domestically, then I did not have reliable internet, and then it was the holidays. Now that none of these things are no longer applicable, hopefully I will be able to be more reliable here.

Though all concrit is welcome, I would especially appreciate comments on characterization and voice, as that's something I'm always worried about - sometimes it's hard to tell how much is a character deviating from canon due to experiences, and how much is simply ooc behavior.

[nicotinized]

Armin seems to be growing into the sort of person he grew into in canon - less screaming helplessly, more trying to make the best of a bad situation. I know I was one of the people who came to you with concerns like a year ago now, and you handled that really well and dealt with the concerns!

[neverfeltthatway]

Thank you! I always appreciate it when people come to me with concerns, and I'm glad I managed to address them.