First of all, we're very sorry about the delay - on the 9th there was a medical emergency that threw the schedule for the entire game out of whack, and we're still days behind on a number of important tasks.
However, after careful review, while the thread provided does show character interaction, it doesn't provide the sense of voice and personality we were hoping for (and which were also lacking in the personality section). We still don't know what makes this character tick, what his idiosyncracies are, what it is that makes him unique or distinct, why he would react one way when another person might react differently, the things that would let people identify him as himself if he was commuicating through text only - that's what we mean by voice.
Unfortunately, at this time we have to decline this application, but you're more than welcome to resubmit with a revised personality section and samples during the next app round, or to try with another character.
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However, after careful review, while the thread provided does show character interaction, it doesn't provide the sense of voice and personality we were hoping for (and which were also lacking in the personality section). We still don't know what makes this character tick, what his idiosyncracies are, what it is that makes him unique or distinct, why he would react one way when another person might react differently, the things that would let people identify him as himself if he was commuicating through text only - that's what we mean by voice.
Unfortunately, at this time we have to decline this application, but you're more than welcome to resubmit with a revised personality section and samples during the next app round, or to try with another character.