The Powers That Be ([personal profile] powersthatare) wrote in [community profile] synodiporia_ooc 2016-01-04 12:54 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

This is a good, detailed app, but we're struggling to get a clear sense of voice or personality from it. An edit to at least one sample focusing on interaction with others would be great, especially if it was a previous game, meme, or testdrive thread? The personality section could also do better setting these things out, but a really solid sample should hopefully give us all we need.

We look forward to hearing back from you soon! You have until 7 PM CST on the 6th to return revisions; otherwise, we can take a look again next app round!

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