Hi! For the most part, this app looks great, but the samples don't give us a very good feel for Xaldin's emotions, especially when it comes to how he'd interact with others. We'd like to see a revised prose sample in which he directly deals with others and in which his emotional reactions are more strongly highlighted. Given the rest of this app and your Ruvik app previously, we're absolutely confident of your ability to show us a sample that has what we need to accept it. Thanks!