After careful review, we've decided not to accept your application this round. While we appreciate the work put into this application, and especially into the revisions we requested; we're still not fully satisfied that the writing displayed illustrates the character's personality the way we'd like. For a more detailed discussion of the subject, you're welcome to email us, and regardless, you're certainly welcome to try again in another application round with this or any other character.

Thank you very much for your time, and for considering this game.