We like a lot of this app, but we're going to request revisions on personality and point of departure. In both cases, it feels to us as if the characterization given is in broad strokes, and we're having trouble getting a human, organic feel that would give us a better idea of what Jocelyn would be like in specific circumstances. You've done a great job showing the dramatic circumstances that forged her! But we'd like more specifics, more concrete examples, more human moments that give us a better sense of her day-to-day self.

If what we're asking for isn't clear, you're welcome to email the modbox and ask for clarifications.